Bad Eggs


This is a mimetic of the style of Eileen Myles. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/eileen-myles


Bad Eggs

underover
         dorsal
         pressure
i was one to talk,
                to scream,

                silence 
between the rain 
midnight emptying my coffee cup 
yours is over
                      on the furnace,

                                there   there
there                    there
                     there           
      there
  there 

boy i didn’t 
           see
          this coming
and all

it was two 
                                  in the
afternoon
deepening
                 moonlight grip
                to stampede

(a grand collection

            sentience 

sickening into the
green
   floorboards
            poppies
fleshing up
       three at a time

hungry for the 
            lecture to commence
                     tons of it 
purple
                to rage
mornings                  comely with those
     four thistled       roses
frame 
plump cheeks
                to cajole
   leaving like that
                             and everything 
                       shredded sunlight
of cosmic ellipsoides)
                to end
the evening,
   we             dance
        nakedly

crimson shimmering
              dripping 
              emblazoned
       filled to the brim
eating
       chocolate hearts
I told you,
yestereday

               to beat
you look so pretty,
                   there,
              frying
  bird eggs
noonday sun
     falling towards
the eternal 

             stars



Comments

  1. love this! why the consistent droplines?

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    1. Thank you! I believe that the reasons behind anything, especially in art, are up for debate and therefore my poetic choices are largely up to your interpretation. That being said, when I wrote the poem I intended to include multiple parallel narratives, and droplines were an effective method of expressing that. Though not necessarily a feature of Eileen Myles's poetry, I believe that the droplines in this poem fit with their narrow poem structure.

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