Bad Eggs
This is a mimetic of the style of Eileen Myles. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/eileen-myles
Bad Eggs
Bad Eggs
underover
dorsal
pressure
i was one to talk,
to scream,
silence
between the rain
midnight emptying my coffee cup
yours is over
on the furnace,
there there
there there
there
there
there
boy i didn’t
see
this coming
and all
it was two
in the
afternoon
deepening
moonlight grip
to stampede
(a grand collection
sentience
sickening into the
green
floorboards
poppies
fleshing up
three at a time
hungry for the
lecture to commence
tons of it
purple
to rage
mornings comely with those
four thistled roses
frame
plump cheeks
to cajole
leaving like that
and everything
shredded sunlight
of cosmic ellipsoides)
to end
the evening,
we dance
nakedly
crimson shimmering
dripping
emblazoned
filled to the brim
eating
chocolate hearts
I told you,
yestereday
to beat
you look so pretty,
there,
frying
bird eggs
noonday sun
falling towards
the eternal
stars
love this! why the consistent droplines?
ReplyDeleteThank you! I believe that the reasons behind anything, especially in art, are up for debate and therefore my poetic choices are largely up to your interpretation. That being said, when I wrote the poem I intended to include multiple parallel narratives, and droplines were an effective method of expressing that. Though not necessarily a feature of Eileen Myles's poetry, I believe that the droplines in this poem fit with their narrow poem structure.
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