The Dog-Roses


This is a mimetic written in the style of Dean Young. https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/dean-young

The Dog-Roses

We, where the sea meets the earth, sat
sidelong on the boardwalk and sipped
on chocolate cones, yours with raspberry
sprinkles. I wondered that whales live on 
our same planet - these enormous blue 
hunks of meat monumental and making 
music of their own. those pesky unconvincing
skyscrapers sheer towers of waterlike glass never
quite impressed me you murmured even 
as the collateral that was my heart
melted into the sand, but I’ve been told 
two is better than one, but what about 
noses, would I smell better with two? is
three better than one, too? but what about
breasts, I could have triplets then 
It was striking, your strange hair under
salt and sun and the acid rain, which 
always smelled so foul to drive away my thoughts
leaning on the steering wheel I hold my 
obelisk of capitalism gleaming in sight,
a comfort, reminding of my glorious potential,
dashing good looks, and guarantee of
failure. You didn’t like the styrofoam taste
of the end so you tossed it without looking
into the gaping bill of a gull who had probably
seen plenty of whales, I have never seen one even
blow water and fish guts and kelp out of its’ head
which is what I hear they do, sucking in great 
quantities of seawater for a spattering of teeny
tiny krill. I suppose I should know. I’m a 
telemarketer. my plump face and the rosehips 
fade into a stain on the bench where we
never sat again, forever is a very long time

Comments

  1. how do you find the poets for these mimetics?

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  2. I am taking a class on the New York School of Poetry, and frequently write mimetics to understand individual poet's styles on a deeper level! I have been publishing my favorites.

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